The differences between men and women have always evoked strong emotions. After many years of debate, women and men still struggle with gender bias. Deborah Tannen's "Gender Gap in Cyberspace" examines how men and women use computer technology differently. Ironically, Tannen has some stereotypical opinions about women; however, she honors the exceptions. Tannen has two main goals in the essay. Her first objective is to show that men are concerned with the technology needed to operate computers. Secondly, she believes that women are primarily interested in using computers as a work tool.

Tannen began forming most of her views about computers through Email correspondence in which she described how young boys are typically motivated by a social structure that says, "If you don't dominate, you will be dominated" (184). In other words, some men work with computers in order to master others.

While Tannen believes men are interested in computer technology, her opinion of women is quite different. She says, "Girls and women are more likely to respond, 'This thing wont cooperate. Get it away from me'" (185). Tannen is implying that women do not have the patience to understand computers.

In my opinion, I find the essay is too vague. I think Tannen should have elaborated more and provided specific examples. I think her personal experiences, rather than proven facts, are presented in the essay. Although I feel the essay needs some improvement, I am always delighted to read something that is not full of unnecessary details. However, I am troubled when a writer assumes too much about the audience. Because I am fairly knowledgeable about computers, it was not difficult for me to understand the essay and agree with Tannen's stereotypes.

I also feel that the essay does not really address the topic. Tannen says more about the use of computers by men and women than she does about gender bias. Her only references to gender bias are statements by Susan Herring and Laurel Sutton. They believe that women have the usual problems of worrying about their messages being attacked or ignored. The anonymity of public networks frees a small number of men to send long, vituperative, sarcastic messages that many other men either tolerate or actually enjoy. Most women are turned off by these messages (185). Although this is true in many cases, men and women have the option to block unwanted Email.

In conclusion, I think the essay is well-written overall, but it does not have enough examples to prove Tannen's thesis. I always think that an essay that informs its audience without unwanted details is better than an essay that is long and repetitive; but at the same time I think a writer should include vital information.

Tannen, Deborah. "Gender Gap in Cyberspace." Cyber Reader. 2nd ed. Ed. Victor J. Vitanza. Needham Heights, MA: 184-186.